Feedback from S1-22 on final cut

We thought that S1-23's rough cut was of a good standard already and we thought not many improvements needed to be made. The ident at the beginning we thought looked more professional and set the scene well. The credits font colour looked better as they can be easily read and they appeared on the scene for a good amount of time. I think that they successfully fulfilled the task.

Feedback on Roughcut from S1-22

The use of sound was conventional to a thriller as the choice of music created tension and added suspense. The diegetic sound of Chris breathing was really effective as the range of sound types was creative.

The credits were really creative and worked well with the edits of the footage. However some of the font colours that were green were fairly difficult to read. We also thought some of the vertical angles made it hard to read quickly.

We thought the ending was really effective as the non-diegetic sound worked with the close-up of the gun. We like the 'Anonymous' title on the gun as it didn't look cheap. The POV shots were effective and they suited the type of sub-genre it was.