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Feedback from s1-21;
The ten second breakdown was very descriptive, describing each second well. Their opening sequence flows well. Although filming outside for so much of the film may be difficult, as weather conditions might effect what they've planned. To solve this they should begin filming early to ensure if weather is bad then they have plenty of time to capture their footage. They have explored a variation of shot types well. When editing their footage it will be essential to put the heavy breathing, soundtrack and the right time of clip all at the same time may be difficult, but taking time of this part it could boost their grade. Straight away i could tell the theme of their thriller was action, i believe they have gone about this genre well, it is simple but effective.

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